Well, this is fairly short, but effective. It says what it needs to. I like how a lot of your poems are quite short. I guess it's your trademark. I like your title too. It has a lot of meaning behind it. It makes me think of restriction and security.
I also adore your cryptic imagery: the idea that home opens when the mind does. It seems very philosophical and very open for discussion. I also like the idea that this character possesses no wealth, as if he has no choice. The character seems to be bitter. This is just my interpretation. I may be completely missing the point, but this is just the way I see it.
When you said "share what humanity surrounds this fire", it seems sarcastic. It seems to suggest that humanity is evil, and how man kills everything. Again, this is my interpretation, and I may be missing the point. But this poem has a lot of different meanings attached, which makes it hard to pinpoint exactly what the meaning is. But isn't that what a great poem is? Something without true meaning?
I loved this. This was great. Congratulations.
Points: 40
Reviews: 279
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