Hi Nomad! 
So, first of all, I like the poem. 
It was good though... You need to work on the poetry paragraphs and some of the punctuation. Also, the title should have been "You" or "You are the only one.", since its describing about someone the most, and not others.
Now, there are 12 lines in this poem which is an even number, and it doesn't make things difficult.
Now, let's put these to a paragraph, I may rearrange some:
UrbanNomad wrote:
You are the only one.
beside many dry
shapeless characters-
they are people I suppose...
some attractive,
others I cannot like.
But you,you
#BF0000 ">You take the bearing,of my eyes
#BF0000 ">of my eyes.and read them
and focus
#BF0000 ">To read them and focus,
all their direction
onto yours.
[b]Overall: I like it, and you've described the person heartily. Like this part: v.v
[quote="UrbanNomad]
But you, you
take the bearing of my eyes
[/quote]
That was absolutely cute,loving and perfect. ^.^ Keep it up! You're a great writer! xD I would give this a 7/10.
Keep Writing ! ~
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