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Dear UrbanNomad,
You bring to us a beautiful tale of one who has grown up through the years and has figured out things about not just the world but as well themselves. Some of these facts are things that completely destroy all of his former beliefs as a child when he was young, innocent, and untouched by such complex thoughts that he holds onto now. I find this poem to be both a fantastic personal monologue and a fate that I’m sure many shares; I know I am one of those individuals. I can’t wait to read another poem crafted by your sharp mind in the future.
Sincerely,
The A
I really liked this. i see no real faults at all. please keep it up!