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Hi Hudz here,
but I love how much you have written and I dearly hope that you do elaborate on it.
You have a very nice poem.
I just have a few things to point out, if I may. I feel like your poem could have been so much better. Before I began to fully immerse into you poem it ended. It had suddenly ended and the image that you were creating inside my mind went away before I could grab it.
Usually small poems consist of strong impacting words that don’t need elaboration. In truth small poems are harder to make then longer ones. (Im sorry if I sound like a really mean prick) but I truly think that if you add more description so that I could capture the image before it leaves, it would be better.
(If you do then please buzz me on my page and I would love to read the rest, if not its okay)
Luv
Hudz
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Have a nice day!!