Thanks for the reviews guys. ^_^
Blink:
Haha, I swear you always add on that 'but feel free to disregard everything I've said' thing. XD You really don't need to - you always offer some great advice.
Really, I'm just trying to write a story based around lucid dreaming, but I want a lot of the story to be set in the real world. I wanna try to have the dreams reflect the reality of James' life, and for the dreams to also present a joyful escapism from the boredom and depression of his life. But that comes in later - this bit here is just an introduction to the concept of lucid dreaming (to both James and the reader).
yrclever:
Yeah, this is just an opening to a longer story. (The final story will be somewhere between 3,000 and 4,000 words - this first 800 words is basically an intro.) There'll hopefully be more conflict introduced soon to give the story more of a drive, but it's reassuring to know that you found this bit interesting regardless. ^_^
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