Wished the same wishes for years
Over and again, cried the same
Tears
Waited for the same hero to come
Wanted for the same love
Since she become
Chorus-
One day these wings will fly me away from this place
The place that haunts my battered heart
Wish I could take her with me but this is her place, Horizon's mine
Mine
Lonely Horizon
Misunderstood, faced her whole word alone
Tragic history she regrets, though it's not her fault
So she turned her back on the world, as it turned its back on her
Pre-Chorus
And it hurts! Still into the night, hear her words-
Chorus-
One day these wings will fly me away from this place
The place that haunts my battered heart
Wish I could take her with me but this is her place, Horizon's mine
Mine
Lonely Horizon
Say what you like, she's going her way
She won't look back for anything
There wasn't much there for her anyway
So Goodbye! and good riddance
Chorus-
One day these wings will fly me away from this place
The place that haunts my battered heart
Wish I could take her with me but this is her place, Horizon's mine
Mine
Lonely Horizon
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
139,506 Literary Works • 672,594 Reviews
The structure (and other stuff) REALLY needs editing, but there's no 'Edit' option, so ignore any mistakes that are not related to the actual words, OK? Thanks.
Edit's back! I'll fix it.....eventually
OK, it's too complicated to fix. Sorry.