This one is very good I like your title of the poem
I wish I was sometimes a bird they are ALWAYS free
and I wish I could fly hihiii
I think your message of this poem is that we all want to be
free, but actually nobody is free
we all are caged in a body that we not have make by ourselves
I know the answer right now!
We ARE free and happy thoughts let us fly
I like your thought of this poem, you use strong words
You are a great writer, keep on writing
Love: Bree
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