this isn't for reviews; it's for all my amazing YWS bffs! It's in random order!
Tucker, plz come back,
my 1 tru luvr!
The Writing is what truly matters,
not how many Words you have.
The Razzle to my Razzle Dazzle, the Huny to my
Huny Bun. Oh yea,I earned brownie points with her!
Mean men mostly Mr Macklebee
make me mean, make me Mustard!
My writing, wondrous writing,
is the equivalent of written Calligraphy
I am notorious for trouble; Is that a bad thing?
I'm Crafty in my ways of attack; the perfect components of a Writer!
I was Born to be amazing. To Be a winner, that was me.
A star can be in many forms. If I'm so amazing, why am I a Writer?
XOxo, i love you JoJo
xoXO
Lava is trickling
through my veins,
My Skins are creeping
at this sight,
I surrender; you
can have my Sol. (couldn't get Solvarly in there)
All of life is an
amazing Puzzle!
And the Ninjathat eats a
Cookie is a Monster.
The Blue of the Water
compliments the Lily
The Lady that is the daughter Of The man called Death
gave me some Roses earlier today.
The Apple of YWS
is always here with us.
Dragons are the core
of my writing career.
The Flower who has a Child,
but it isn't the same as the first.
For Mrs. Sakin's well being,
I must live in her Shadow.
Foxy people and handsome
players are everywhere these days.
I'm amazing, A success with my Book of
knowledge, an ordinary Person can't compare.
A man called Jash told me to find a Bag with
a diamond, ad give it to Mr.Baldo.
Pink sheets you must lay over crops to be Sheared,
and oh, don't you forget the Water!
Rangers and police officers search the
area, like a Hawk stalking its prey.
S'no problem, really,
all yo have to do is buy more Ink.
TIGER Lily's most favorite
drink is SPRITE.
Ultra weapons come with responsibility,
it helps if you have Violet eyes.
Is that all you got?
Ha! that's nothing!
Vast possibilities, I must choose;
which once is good enough? Which City?
This Water is supposedly sacred, so here is where I drop
my Lily in memory of of a Girl I once knew.
Wicked fun we're having,
I Wonder how he does it!
These are all of my best friends,
become one to me and you'll soon find.
You'll be on this list.
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Awesome one, Cool way to use a poem
where is SweetMoments
I think this is so cute! I like it. It's very a nice thing for your friends.
o.o -looks at- where's Tuck?
Wow, This is soo cool! Best way to show your writing friends that you appreciate them! Awesome <3
Uh, GENIUS!
Just sayin'. Yeah, this isn't something to critique, just something to enjoy. It's soo cool. Well, what else is there to say...?
Keep writing,
StoryWeaver
This is brilliant! I <3 it! You're so clever! I enjoyed reading it!
Did I miss myself at the beginning before?
How odd.
edit: oh. I see what you did there.
Aww thanks! Can't believe I'm on the list!! Lol
~Tabs~
Whoo, I made the list!
jabber what's wrong with your avatar?!That's not any lavitar I've ever seen. lol
This is incredible! I applaud your creativity.
Wow...You'rE just great!! It's so sweet
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EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC!!! Dragon, you're one of the best! LOL
I can't believe I only saw this like, right now...hahah! And I'm in it!WHOPP! you deserve a bunch of kisses and hugs!
From Jashy...
~~xoxoxoxox
This is awesome, nice play on words by the way, i feel loved hahahaha
yay!
Weapons AND violet eyes? This officially rocks! xD
Clever! I'm a lil' insulted though... Haha kidding! Good work!
I love this, its so awesome!
Really cleverly done
Wow, this is incredibly creative! Love it! Thanks so much.
awww *hugs you so tight* you are so amazing!!
Haha, that's so cool!
You're so sweet... xD
I can't believe I've only now spotted this, especially considering this is on the featured works! I have no idea why I haen't looked at this before... I need to be a lot more observant from now on, I think...
'Tis epic, Dragon!
ZOMG
YOU
ARE
FRICKIN"
EPICALLY
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*SUPERQUADRUPLEGLOMPS*
This is the cutest thing I've ever seen.
Ha! The moment I opened this, I knew you wouldn't get my name in it.
*feels very pleased...for some strange reason*
Awww, thanks, you're my bestest friend too! In fact, everyone is.
THIS IS SO COOL! I ended up singing it in the end, look, I still have it in my head and for some reason is rhyming it with Pink's new song.
This is AMAZING :') *huggles*
This is awesome!
Pink's given you one, but I'll still give you another penguin!
This is just amazing! *hugs* Thank you!
I love this! O_______O You're absolutely awesome! *huggles*
That's awesome, Dragon. Very clever. *Huggles*
Ah, sorry, it's NaNo. I'm not allowed to think too hard, or my brain may explode.
Oohh..i feel so loved.
It's like your watching a magician; he's a magician, or something.Thanks, everyone!!
One thing, yeah, I'm a girl.
But other then that, awesome.
Ha, ha! This is great! I love how you managed to make all the names make sense!
Pink, yours was the hardest. I even had to go onto Dictionary.com to look up Shear. You name is soo hard to make into a stanza!
Yays! =3
You deserve a penguin for this! Totally.
Woot Woot! I love it!
thanks! *contimplates to add lava or not*... why not? your name will be here soon, lava! And XxJoJoxX
Heheh.. you can't really critic this sort of thing( since it comes from the heart/soul)
Overall, good job!
Awesome!