This is an intriguing poem. It tells me of the persona's love of reading yet wastes no time with fancy wording. I definitely love the way the poem is structured, with there being no more than four words in a line and the sentence continuing flawlessly for the rest of the stanza. Suggestions: Punctuation can help with expressing moods or emotions as a single comma could mean the difference between relief and sadness. Also complexity ( this is completely optional) can enhance your poem if used appropriately. Being generic is an amazing option of writing, it's just a matter of personal preference as I rather complexity.
All in all, amazing poem, I hope to see more works from you in the future.
Points: 281
Reviews: 23
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