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Not a bad poem, just a little hard to read, I couldnt find any rhythm in it, and well... it was somewhat lacking in subject matter. Spice it up a little, has the potential to be good. Keep Writing!
Hey, this was interesting... Not my favorite, but I do like it. Now I'm wondering which parts are fiction (and what you haven't been telling me)?
This part I don't like so much... I'm not really sure why though. Sorry that wasn't helpful.
Typo there, should be "You've." This line is strangely worded. Something along the lines of "someone who has never (and will never) hurt you." if you really want to use those parenthesis... I think if you can find away to make your point without them it'll help.
Nice job
I like it. Maybe because it does relate to me, and it just spoke out to me.
Hahah, when I first started reading it I was all, "Mhm-hm." And then I was all, "o.o I know, right?!"
It's alright. It's not too captivating as say other ones, but I'm not a big fan of romantic poems. I liked the baseball references because I haven't seen that done before, but that's it. I think it needs to flow a lot better, but that's about it.
I like the subject of the poem, mostly because I think it's something we all can relate to at some point. But to me it's not to....I don't know flowing I guess. I'm no poet expert, so don't take my critique too close to heart--there's a chance that I have no clue what I'm talking about.
I enjoyed it though, thank you!