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This was a sweet poem, suitable for your sweet dog.
I don't really like the way the first stanza is worded, but other than that it was great! Well, that's about all I have to say... keep writing!
Its a very big transition and adds the shock effect at the stanza that states right out into the open,
. It makes the poem more intresting and leads the reader to go on. I like how the poem acts a eulogy to your beloved dog. The end, , is a great conclusion that sums up all of its descriptions. Great and memorable work!Awww, this was so sweet. Just one thing: Typically when writing a poem you capitalize the first letter of each line. Just a thought. It's okay the way it is, but I'm picky about that kind of thing.
Like I said, very nice.