it was interesting. i liked it to tell you the truth.
"Only Ghouls and Ghost came out to play."
do you mean ghouls and ghosts? and why are they capitalized?
"Sacrificed water is a phenomenal gift, because
... It was as black as black could be,
Just drifting, drifting, drifting.
then! Something magical happened,
It started to rain, pour, Cleanse the Earth."
are you saying that the sacrificed water is black? thats interesting because it seems like it should be cleaning and purifying. and black makes it seem murky or filthy
i didn't understand the whole poem but it was fine. it seemed a bit happy. the !!!! points made it gay
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