You sir, just made my day. Ill keep this short, as stupid phone keys are stupid. No need to lenghten this whatsoever in my opinion, that remark about the Skittles was brilliant. 
Once upon a time, there was a unicorn named Paul. Paul was a very friendly unicorn who loved carrots and to play with the bunnies. One day, Paul decided to go over the rainbow to play with the bunnies.
But when he crossed the rainbow, one of the bunnies ran up to him crying. Paul out of the goodness of his heart asked the little bunny what was wrong. The little bunny looked up at Paul with wide watery eyes and said, “Paul! We have no carrots left, and the power of the rainbow is slowly fading away!”
Paul looked back at the rainbow and saw that it was indeed disappearing. He looked back at the little bunny and declared, “Not to worry! I have plenty of carrots and I have Skittles, so the rainbow will come back!”
The little bunny cheered and they all had an amazing day.
THE END
You sir, just made my day. Ill keep this short, as stupid phone keys are stupid. No need to lenghten this whatsoever in my opinion, that remark about the Skittles was brilliant.
Love how the title is longer than the story...
So, I agree this should be extended. I think Paul should have to go on a quest to get the carrots... maybe to the tree of ever-lasting carrots or whatever...
I think you've got a nice little idea going on, but this seems more like a plot outline than an actual story.
Love how the title is longer than the story...
So, I agree this should be extended. I think Paul should have to go on a quest to get the carrots... maybe to the tree of ever-lasting carrots or whatever...
I think you've got a nice little idea going on, but this seems more like a plot outline than an actual story.
Alright.....
So this is a VERY short...short story. 
But that's okay.
This is so adorable. Adorable. <3
Paul. Pauls nice. OKAY. Back to the review. ;D.
I think it would've been more exiting if you extended the story, gotten a little more into deep detail. Yes. It's cute though. 
~Katie
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