Stolen Tears

Hey there! My name's Rosie, and I'll be reviewing this today!

First off, I adore the feeling of this poem. It's sort of weird, but in a good way, and I'm a big fan of poetry that's like that. It also borders on being slightly jumbled, but you managed to keep it just polished enough to be an interesting read without crossing the line to being too difficult to understand. Great work!

There's a very nice rawness about this piece, especially in the last four lines. The simplicity of it adds to the weird feeling I mentioned earlier, and it accentuates that feeling very nicely.

If I had any critique, it would be to make more of the poem like the last four lines. My favorite poetry - and this is just my personal preference, so if you disagree with me, don't feel bad at all - rides the line between being blurred and telling a story, and you did this very well in the last four lines. However, during the middle of the poem, I missed the little touches of imagery that you showed in the last part. So maybe, in future poems, I would consider using more of your awesome imagery.

Overall, amazing work! Oh, and welcome to YWS. I absolutely love it here, and I hope you do too. I hope to see more of your work.

Best wishes,

-Rosie