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This is just excellent. I don't find many poems written with this level of craft. Please give me some insight into your inspiration for it. "But there are too many colours to breathe,/ and not enough people to know" - I definitely am feeling that, really understanding it in my own way. I love using the word 'colours' in my own poems because it represents a spectrum; essentially covering all outcomes and experiences.
I will read some of your other material because I think our poetry styles are complimentary (mine left wanting after reading this!)
Regards, Nomad