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Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two reviews. You will probably never see this but....Imma do this anyway.
First Impression: So...this one is yet another type of story that you seem to have experimented with and I have to see this one worked out pretty well too. Definitely very true to the form that you are trying to emulate and the writing is pretty good as far as textbooks. Its a direction that I have rarely seen an author take and I think you do an admirable job here.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Excerpt from “World History 6”
… Chapter 12 – The Mutt War
Thou hath reminded me of mine history back (Hint: I do not like history) but I shall do my best.
In 2048, the fields of genetic manipulation and cloning exploded. Before, experiments had been limited to animals and generally not crossing species lines. Then, with the passing of the Scientific Freedom Act in 2046, science was granted permission by the UN to experiment with unwanted human embryos from fertility clinics, as well as adult volunteers.
Sounding like a text book so far.
It took two years for opposition to thaw and then an influx of experimentation and products arrived on the scene. The most popular pet in 2049 was the “kuppy” (a “kitten puppy”), a mixture of cat and dog that retained infant characteristics of both. By 2053, genetic modifications could be written into human-cloned organs for transplants that could make the receiver stronger, keener, or lengthen their life span. As of 2180, over 10,000 previous world records have been broken by “transplanted” individuals.
Well this is inevitable.
In 2054, Howland Industries shook the fields of warfare and science simultaneously when CEO Richard Howland unveiled human/animal hybrids called “Mutts” for use as soldiers. The Mutts were extremely efficient, intelligent and self-producing, making them an ideal soldiering force. Countries around the world swooped to buy them. The three largest customers were the United States, Old Russia (the northern portion of the Russia of today) and Palestine. Together, these three nations have become known as the “Three Stooges” (based on an early 20th century comedy of the same name), for having “bought in” to the Mutts as many critics accused.
Not quite sure about the three stooges part but he rest sounds legitimate enough to be history.
The Mutts seemed to be doing their job perfectly. However, they were discriminated against for being less than human. This increased even as the Mutts were integrated more into everyday society, working as club bouncers or bodyguards, as well as soldiers. Rather than being more acceptable, the Mutts’ differences from humanity were emphasized and reviled.
Well I mean this is obviously going to happen although you would want to use them in society is mystery to me. Seems like a completely unnecessary move that a government would honestly be far too paranoid to do. Have they never seen Terminator.
As news of the Fairbanks Incident spread, similar situations popped up all around the world. Mutts retaliated with deadly measures to attacks on their own kind. Over 187 people around the world were killed in 2065 due to Mutt-related violence. In the face of the massive public outcry, Howland Industries issued a recall of all the Mutt units.
Well this is showing some streamlining of the scene that we have seen so far in this series of shorts.
This caused general panic across the globe and several countries, including the Three Stooges, declared formal war on the Mutts. Many vigilante groups (most notably the “Silver Bullets”, an American gang dedicaterd to exterminating the Mutts with their signature ammunition – solid silver bullets) roamed various countries for years. Some, such as the “Wolftrap,” still exist, though none are the active forces they once were.
Silver honestly is not a great choice for bullets because those things are ridiculously inaccurate as they can't grip the rifling in a gun barrel. Stick with lead or brass if you must.
Since 2074, there has not been a single confirmed sighting of a Mutt, through many have claimed to have seen them. Along with aliens, Mutts are blamed for many strange occurrences, most frequently abductions.
Hmm so by this point we would have a Buzzfeed Unsolved Episode about hem.
Discovery presses forward. Perhaps one day, humans will be able to fly or breath underwater and Earth will contain a race of superhumans. The Mutts were a small stumbling block on the road to scientific achievement.
Definitely a text book here.
1.) What year was the Scientific Freedom Act passed? What did this act allow?
2.) What are “Mutts”? What was their purpose?
3.) In what year did Howland Industries unveil the Mutts?
4.) What three countries formed the “Three Stooges”? Why?
5.) What was the Fairbank Incident of 2065?
6.) What are the “Silver Bullets”?
7.) What is the CMC? What is its goal?
8.) What is the general public feeling towards actively hunting out alleged Mutt covens?
Getting flashbacks.
Aaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall a nice little history lesson for us. I feel like I should be doing homework now which means you did your job very well. The language that you used was just about perfect for the type of story you are trying to write and the use of exact dates and such is also very true to a real life textbook. If all our history books contained things like this I might have paid more attention in that class.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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