Hello! Hope you're having a lovely day, night, or whatever time it is for you there right now! Quill here for a short review
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Wow, what a poem.
''No one knows what goes through my mind
No one knows how complicated I am
I was once called a problematic child
I was once told i was unfit to be in society''
No one really understands what goes through my mind, I don't know what goes through there's. So many moments, emotions, so many words, are hidden behind faces that don't show the thoughts behind them. Even if you think you can read their emotions, you never know what's there. Hidden. And I love they way you brought that to light.
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''I'm a mence
I'm a addict that doesn't know the meaning of limits
Someone please understand me
Someone please wait for me''
That feeling when you think no-one wants you, no-one understands you. There's no worth fo you. Even though there's so much to your life, and you really DO matter. It's so hard. It's really cool how you get your point across without straight out saying ''this is what I think'' well done, it takes skill.
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that feeling of wanting to give up, even though there's hope. It's hard to deal with, it's hard to keep on going with all. These emotions. You did an amazing job of capturing this all in this poem''My body wants to give up
My body doesnt have a choice
I am slilent in the depths of madness
I am lonely in this unfit society ''
Thank you for making this poem because these are important feelings to represent and talk about it all. You did an amazing job writing this aswell. I really enjoyed reading this poem!
Keep writing!
~Quill
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