Young Writers Society

Hey there Empires, popping her for a quick review. If there is any offensive or unclear on something I said, feel free to reply me or PM me.

OH, MY GOD! I PITY MR TOOTHFAIRYYYYYYY.

Hilarious, creative, short, sweet content.
Such ignorant Mr Tooth Fairy. poor him.

I do question why his wallet is the victim of tooth collector centre?

Anywhere, what's with Santa?
He always gave her the eye around Christmas time. It's unclear why Santa needs to eye her.

But, I love the hilarious behind the scenes of ToothFairy!

Keep it up!

Hey I am her to give you a review. This is a rather interesting piece of writing and I can't say that it makes that much sense. After all it is called Mr. Tooth Fairy. This suggests that the tooth fairy is male or it is her husband. Anyway all that I have to really say is that if you are going to write something like this then add a little bit more and have it make a bit more sense. I had to read this three times!(More than I should) in order to truly get it's meaning so pleas either in the summary add something that helps it make a bit more sense or add a bit more detail into this writing. Anyway thats all that there is to it. Bye~

Say! This is some extremely good stuff. LOL!


That is hilarious! Makes sense though. At least far more sense than his manufacturing toys all his life for the sole purpose of giving them away at no profit. So that's why he's so jolly each year! Good material for a flash fiction story.