Hey @Chitz ! I loved your poem . It's short but really sweet.
You used very simple words to evoke some deep emotions. You kept the readers captivated and mesmerized with your poem .
I guess the minimum use of punctuations and no capitalization made your poem look more beautiful and kept a smooth flow .
Though as pointed out by tgham99 ,I will also admit that I felt something missing in the line -
" being where
is adventurous"
So it's better that you add an 'it' there.
I will also mention that I liked your choice of the title. It felt
really compelling to me.
Overall , it was a wonderful piece of poetry. Loved your style of writing.
Keep up the good work!
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