Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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Sins
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Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:16 pm
Sins says... · Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:16 pm
Donneeeee, brev.

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Wariofart
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Tue Jul 06, 2010 6:16 pm
Wariofart says... · Tue Jul 06, 2010 6:16 pm
I'd like a review Skins!

Chapter 1 of my new story Crashing Down:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66361

But I'd really like a review on chapter 2, since it hasn't got any yet. I know two asking for two reviews will make me seem like a big review stealer, so only do chapter 2 if you want to.
URL of Chapter 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66504
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Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:44 pm
ultraviolet says... · Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:44 pm
Hey Skins! Fancy seeing you here. ;)

Anyways, down to business. Will you review the first chapter of my new novel? Pretty please with a cherry on top! Here's the link. Anti Amnesia - Chapter 1
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Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:25 pm
Sins says... · Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:25 pm
Yours are done, Wariofart. :)

I'll get to yours A.S.A.P ultraviolet. I've had loads of requests lately, so it's taking me a while to get to everyone quickly.
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Thu Jul 08, 2010 5:18 pm
Sins says... · Thu Jul 08, 2010 5:18 pm
All done, ultraviolet :)

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Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:10 pm
WritingWords says... · Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:10 pm
Hi, Skins!! I love your reviews, and you seemed really experienced. Can you review Chapter Three of Popularity Wars? Thank you! It's in my signature! I would REALLY appreciate it!
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!




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Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:43 pm
Sins says... · Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:43 pm
All done :)

Now, I'm going away for the weekend. Because of that, I won't be able to get any reviews done in the next two days. This is still open for requests, just don't expect to receive a critique from me straight away.
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Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:01 pm
AquaMarine says... · Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:01 pm
I don't mind if it takes time. It's a poem: 'Comedy'. topic66755.html
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Sins
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Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:11 pm
Sins says... · Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:11 pm
Done, Aqua! Sorry it wasn't very helpful...

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Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:51 pm
Elinor says... · Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:51 pm
Skins! So, I reworked a bit of the first chapter of Into the Depths, so could you take a look at that again? Thanks. :D

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Sins
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Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:12 pm
Sins says... · Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:12 pm
All done, Eli :)

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Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:01 am
seeminglymeaningless says... · Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:01 am
I don't have a piece for you to review; I'm just here to say, congratulations on the feature, and it's clear why you have so many shiny badges :) What you're doing for the YWS community is a really fantastic contribution, and not once in any of these 12 pages have I seen you baulk at the same people repeatedly. . . "using" you, for lack of a better word :)

I'm surprised you're not a moderator or anything :)

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Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:56 pm
Sionarama says... · Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:56 pm
SKINS!!!! How are u?? Anyway... I'd like u to review the 3rd chapter of After Adonis please and thanks!
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Sins
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Wed Jul 14, 2010 3:53 pm
Sins says... · Wed Jul 14, 2010 3:53 pm
All done! XD
And thanks, seeminglymeaningless. I feel so loved... :lol:

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Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:44 pm
Junglelover says... · Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:44 pm
Hey Skins!

Would you mind reviewing this viewtopic.php?t=63683 for me?

Thanks!
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