Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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No worries, CodyKnight!

Anyone else?
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Hey Skins,

I've added new chapters to War of Dawn since your review of the first chapter. If you're interested, let me know what you think!

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Thanks.




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All done!

Any more requests?
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I've seen your fantastic reviews on things, so I decided to come request something! XD

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Hi, Skins! Would you kindly review my short story?
A Test of Will
Thank you very much for your consideration!
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All done!

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Could I get a review on this piece?

Treasure Every Moment
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Hi there!

I was hoping you could review my novel chapters for me? I'm looking for reviews on my chapters 3 and 4, but it definitely helps if you read the previous chapters, for background info and such. Here are the links for chapters 3 and 4, prior chapters can also be accessed from there as well:

Chapter 3, The Name Game
Chapter 4.1, The Name Game
Chapter 4.2, The Name Game

I'm also looking for someone to regularly review my chapters as I put them up, so if my story at all interests you and you're willing, I would love for you to do that! If not I totally understand :)

Thanks in advance!




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Hey there, could you please review

Starlight: Prologue

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)

Thanks in advance !




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@yizhongt - yours are all done!

Working on all standing requests at the moment, and should get to them soon! I'm closing my review thread for the time being as exams are fast approaching, but should be open again for summer.

Thanks guys :)
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