Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

Hidere. My name's Skins and I review stuff.

I mainly review fiction because it's the only thing I really know anything about, so this is mainly a fiction-based reviewing thread. If you really do want me to review any poetry, scripts, art, photography e.t.c. for you though, I'm happy to give it a shot. Just know that the review may not be the most professional one in the world.

If you would like a review, simply post the link as a reply. I will try and get back to you as soon as possible



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Can you review my story, A Criminal's Heart.
Here's the link:

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3

Done!

Can't wait for the next chapter, by the way!

xoxo Skins

Hello Skins,


I was wondering if you could review the novel that I am working on? It is a romantic fiction, rated for twelve and up. The chapters aren't that long, (Each about 1000 words or so), and I really need the advice to help me to grow as a writer. Any comments that you could give me are appreciated. You don't have to review the first one because that is the only one that got a lot of reviews! Here are the links, and thank you if you choose to review:


Chapter Four: topic61755.html

Chapter One: viewtopic.php?t=61362

Chapter Two: viewtopic.php?t=61460

Chapter Three: viewtopic.php?t=61553

Thank you very much,

Esther Sylvester

I've managed to review the first three!
I'll definitely get back to the fourth one as well. I've got to go now though, my brother wants the computer

EDIT: I've done them all now

Thank you so much Skins! I will work on my novel as soon as I can!

Hey Skins,
can you review my story? It's called Luna and it's Fantasy Fiction.
If you wanna read more just tell me, and I'll be sure to post.

Luna 1
Luna 2.1
Luna 2.2
Luna 3

And honestly you don't have to review the first three, but you certainly can.(I would be forever grateful if you did.) Plus I only really need a review on Chapter 3, but it won't make sense if you don't read the rest.

Thanks,
~Danie

Viola!

I'm done with yours Danie!

xxx

My turn to ask for your opinion skins
topic61868.html
it's a short novella. Either it will suck you in, or it won't, in both cases I'd be thankfull if you say why...

Hey napalmerski

I've never actually done an advanced critique before, but I'm definitely up for it! I'll read your novella and get back to you as soon as possible.
Like I said, I haven't reviewed a novella before, so don't expect an amazing critique! I'll do my best though.

xxx

Edit: It's done! I did it in one night... I feel so proud

And a good job it was! Thank you very much, Skins.

Can I has a review...? Pretty please with a cherry on top...? :3

viewtopic.php?t=61814

It's called Last. Other fiction. The first chapter needs some work before I can proceed on posting the second. I hope you like it. :]

Viola!

Yours is done winter

Keep them coming guys!

WOULD YOU REVIEW THIS?
Chapter 4

Thanks in advance!

Yours is done Shubhi.

Hope I was helpful,

xxx