Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.