Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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Thank you so much! (Feel free to pick and choose any chapters you feel like doing)
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I'll get to that as soon as possible, Princess. :)

It might take me a while though because I want to read the whole thing and then give you and overall review at the end about what I think of the story.
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It took me a while... but I'm all done, Princess :D

I hope that I helped somewhat.

Anyone else want a review now that I'm free...?
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Can you please review this?

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Done, Val 8)

Next...?
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Hello.

Can you review this?

topic67756.html

If you want, I can link the earlier chapters.
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Hey would you please review this?

It's a prologue to a story I'v been working on. It's sort of action adventure/somewhat sci-fi

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Thank you!
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All done, guys :)

Anyone else...?
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Done, Lena :)

Does anyone else want a review before I go on holidays?
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I remade my poem. topic67891.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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My poem dude!

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Thanks in advance!
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Doneee guys. :D

Now, I'm going on holidays for two weeks later today, so I don't think I'll be able to get anymore reviews done by then. I'm still open for requests, but don't expect anything until at least two weeks... I might be able to get internet connection in the hotel I'm staying in, but I can't promise anything. With any luck, they'll have wi-fi in Palma... :lol:
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You give amazing reviews so I think I am willing to wait two weeks. :)
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All done, Jem :D

I'm now back open for anyone else who wants a review!
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