Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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Donneeeee, brev.

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I'd like a review Skins!

Chapter 1 of my new story Crashing Down:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66361

But I'd really like a review on chapter 2, since it hasn't got any yet. I know two asking for two reviews will make me seem like a big review stealer, so only do chapter 2 if you want to.
URL of Chapter 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66504
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Hey Skins! Fancy seeing you here. ;)

Anyways, down to business. Will you review the first chapter of my new novel? Pretty please with a cherry on top! Here's the link. Anti Amnesia - Chapter 1
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Yours are done, Wariofart. :)

I'll get to yours A.S.A.P ultraviolet. I've had loads of requests lately, so it's taking me a while to get to everyone quickly.
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All done, ultraviolet :)

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Hi, Skins!! I love your reviews, and you seemed really experienced. Can you review Chapter Three of Popularity Wars? Thank you! It's in my signature! I would REALLY appreciate it!
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!




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All done :)

Now, I'm going away for the weekend. Because of that, I won't be able to get any reviews done in the next two days. This is still open for requests, just don't expect to receive a critique from me straight away.
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I don't mind if it takes time. It's a poem: 'Comedy'. topic66755.html
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Done, Aqua! Sorry it wasn't very helpful...

Next?
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Skins! So, I reworked a bit of the first chapter of Into the Depths, so could you take a look at that again? Thanks. :D

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All done, Eli :)

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I don't have a piece for you to review; I'm just here to say, congratulations on the feature, and it's clear why you have so many shiny badges :) What you're doing for the YWS community is a really fantastic contribution, and not once in any of these 12 pages have I seen you baulk at the same people repeatedly. . . "using" you, for lack of a better word :)

I'm surprised you're not a moderator or anything :)

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SKINS!!!! How are u?? Anyway... I'd like u to review the 3rd chapter of After Adonis please and thanks!
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All done! XD
And thanks, seeminglymeaningless. I feel so loved... :lol:

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Hey Skins!

Would you mind reviewing this viewtopic.php?t=63683 for me?

Thanks!
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