Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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Viola!

Done, jungle 8)

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66775 please and thank you ^-^ <3
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Done :D

Anyone else out there who wants a review...?
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Hi Skins! Mind reviewing this short story (it may turn into a novel, if I decide to continue with it) please? Much appreciated. :D Marley
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Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thanks a bunch in advance!

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Doneeeee, 8)

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hello darlin' girl, it's the naive homeschooler haha ;)
anyway do you think you could kinda sorta, maybe, i don't know REVIEW MY WORK!!! PLEASE!!

goodness knows i need it haha

that would be wonderful!!

~Adeera
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Done, Adeera :)

You didn't really specify anything so I just picked something from your portfolio. If you want me to review something else, just ask!

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Hello Skins! I posted the third chapter of 'Crashing Down', and would love a review. You did such a great job on the first two chapters, it'd be great for you to review a third. Thank you!

Crashing Down - Chapter 3
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Hey Skins, I changed my mind. Would you please review the beginning of a novel my sister and I are writing for me? Everything is pretty much explained after the piece. And then I've added more of the story to my last comment, that maybe you could look at too. If you're too busy/don't want to review it/don't like it, that's fine :P

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All done guys :)

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Hi Skins! :D

Could you look at this, please?

Bluelight Ch. 1

Thanks! :D
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Doneee :D


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I have a poem, topic67459.html woudl you review it?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Done, Flower.

Anyone else?
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