Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

Sins · 2010-04-10T22:28:48Z

Hidere. My name's Skins and I review stuff. I mainly review fiction because it's the only thing I really know anything about, so this is mainly a fiction-based reviewing thread. If you really do want me to review any poetry, scripts, art, photography e.t.c. for you though, I'm happy to give it a shot. Just know that the review may not be the most professional one in the world. If you would like a review, simply post the link as a reply. I will try and get back to you as soon as possible .

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Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:51 pm

Sins says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:51 pm

All done.

Anyone else want some of my awesomeness...?

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:12 pm

HorseradishCares says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:12 pm

I would, pwease?
topic66141.html
It's a poem, haha, if you wanted to know...
Thank you! <3

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Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:24 pm

ultraviolet says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:24 pm

I was wondering if you could review this poem for me. Please and thank you.

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Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:40 pm

Sins says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:40 pm

Doneeeee

Next please...?

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:47 am

Elinor says... · Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:47 am

Hi!

Cabin in Mid-Summer

It's in Narrative Poetry.

Thanks Skins!

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Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:31 pm

Sins says... · Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:31 pm

All done Eli

Anyone else...?

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:20 am

ToritheMonster says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:20 am

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Black and Blue, Chapter 2, pleaseeey.

If you'd like to read/review chapter 1, here's a link to that as well

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Thanks!

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:35 pm

MiaParamore says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:35 pm

Hey! Would you mind reviewing my Science Fiction short story? Here is the link: A Chilly Farm
Thanks in advance!

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:24 pm

Sins says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:24 pm

All done, guysssss.

Next please! Xd

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 7:26 pm

ArcticMonkey says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 7:26 pm

Hiya Skins!!!!
Could you review a poem for me? It's my first one since I was like 7 so please critique (be nice, although I know you will!) post732517.html#p732517

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Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:38 am

Sins says... · Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:38 am

All done tam :pirate3:

Any other offers...?

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Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:47 am

razzleberryx says... · Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:47 am

Hey! I only have one post up right now, but you should review it

It's the first poem I've written in a while, so all critique is very much welcome.
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Thanks!

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Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:34 am

Sins says... · Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:34 am

Done.

Next...?

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:46 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:46 pm

Because that last review you gave me completely sucked: topic66499.html

Hopefully I took your advice correctly

(and it was great advice, by the way!)

Thanks in advance. *sniff* Just thought I'd give you a chance to redeem yourself.

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Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:49 am

hero says... · Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:49 am

Hey, Skins! I wrote up some lyrics (as in song lyrics), and I'm hoping to get some more opinions all around. If you could review it for me, that would be lovely. *pretty please?*

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66474.html

Song Title: Fantasy

This guy is so evil you could put him in between two slices of bread and call him an evil sandwich.

Coming at you like a jetpack Shakespeare.

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