Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

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Lava
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:18 pm
Lava says... · Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:18 pm
Amy!

Could you review this : post680303.html#p680303?
Just a short, where I'm trying out something new.

Thanks,
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bubblegum
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:49 pm
bubblegum says... · Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:49 pm
I want you to review my new piece of work. It's romantic fiction, but the romance hasn't started yet. Well, the story is called The Orphanage. The main plot hasn't started quite yet, either, though.. Here's a link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60955.html And you'll find a link to the first part of the first chapter too. Thanks.
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AquaMarine
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:01 pm
AquaMarine says... · Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:01 pm
Mmkay, sorry, forgot to say that I was on holiday! Lava, yours is reviewed. Bubble, I'll get to yours tomorrow!

And, let requests come forth!
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Sins
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:21 pm
Sins says... · Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:21 pm
Could you please review this for me please?
It's kind of a random chapter though... is that okay?
It's Fantasy Fiction, by the way :wink:

Thanks

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PenNPaper
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Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:04 am
PenNPaper says... · Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:04 am
Hi Amy!
Could you review this for me please?
It's under Fantasy.
Here's the link: topic61818.html
Thanks! :D
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AquaMarine
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Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:34 am
AquaMarine says... · Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:34 am
So I think everything's done! Hope the reviews were ok; as always, PM me with any questions.

Now hit me with moar, people!
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AquaMarine
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:10 pm
AquaMarine says... · Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:10 pm
*bumps this baby up*

Did I mention that, er, I'd like some requests?

No?

I'd like some requests, 'kay? :wink:
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:17 pm
Celticmusicgirl says... · Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:17 pm
If you would I would like you to review my fan fiction novel. it is based on the tv series Legion of Superheroes. i am posting the link to the first part. topic62680.html
"No life is forever. We found and fought here. We loved and died here... The crops whither and the bones of hunger walk the sunken roads... The land has failed us... In dance and song we gift and mourn our children. They carry us over the ocean in dance and song.
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AquaMarine
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Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:55 pm
AquaMarine says... · Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:55 pm
Done!

I'm hungry. Fill me with reviews! *rawrs*
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NinjaCookieMonster
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Mon May 03, 2010 4:08 am
NinjaCookieMonster says... · Mon May 03, 2010 4:08 am
Hey! Basically anything on my profile can be reviewed. So... go to there! I don't feel like posting links.


If you do review my various fictions, I shall love you for forever and ever. I pinky promise. Pwease? I'll review ANYTHING you need me to. At all. Or at least, I'll try...
hey, Jude, don't make it bad
take a sad song and make it better
remember to let it into your heart
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AquaMarine
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Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:27 pm
AquaMarine says... · Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:27 pm
Okaaaay, so I'm going to declare this officially open, even though it wasn't officially closed. That means the requests can start pouring coming in!

As said on the main post, I review pretty much anything. I can change the style of my review however you'd like it. Basically, I'm pretty flexible with reviews.

:D
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Yuriiko
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Fri Jun 04, 2010 2:17 am
Yuriiko says... · Fri Jun 04, 2010 2:17 am
Tell me what you think of this:

Link: topic64723.html

Thanks in advance, Aqua! In exchange, can I call Prince Eric for you? hee-hee... sadly, you're no mermaid at all.hahahaha! XD
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AquaMarine
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Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:06 pm
AquaMarine says... · Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:06 pm
Sure thing, guys.
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Tue Jun 08, 2010 11:21 pm
Jenthura says... · Tue Jun 08, 2010 11:21 pm
Wow, when I came here, I was thinking about just putting one piece at a time on (I've got two) but then came along that 'I'm hungry. Fill me with reviews! *rawrs*' and I decided to tame the savage beast...with more work. :D

viewtopic.php?t=64040
Here's one, and...
post702053.html#p702053
Here's the other.

Tanks!
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