Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

You want a review? I'll do it.

That's it, really.

~Amy

I'd like something looked at. It's the start of a novel I'm working on.

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Sure, I've had a look at it but I have to go out so I have no time to review it fully. I'll come back on either later or tomorrow and do it. Sorry.
Aqua X

Don't worry about me; I'm not going anywhere.

Hey there! You don't have to, and if you do, you don't have to straight away, but can you review this:

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I'm unsure about the title...

~ Roon

EDIT: Just so you know, it's a poem

Ok, Krupps is done! (sorry if it's not any good)
Onto roon's ...

Roon's done. Amazing. Sorry I wasn't more help.

Aqua X

Hello, I've never done this before so...sorry. Unfortunately I have no idea how to put a link in this here message, so... in Fantasy fiction, 'October'.
I completely understand if you don't review but I would greatly appreciate it if you did. I need all the help I can get. Thanks...

I definitly will! Sorry, I am off to school in about half an hour and I need to get ready but I will do it when I come home!
Sorry!
Aqua X

Anyone? I don't bite ...

Hey.
I'm new and not sure how to get the linky in the text box.
But I just posted "Breena" in the romantic fiction forum.
Could you tell me what you think?

Hello, I would like this looked at
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It's called scarecrow, and it's a smidget over 1500 words
Short story.
Thanks a ton!

Sure! It's the morning right now so I have no time - but I'll do them both tonight!
~Amy

Done, by the way!
~Amy

I would like a review.
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The Janitors, Action/Adventure. Superhero Story.