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Amy!

Could you review this : post680303.html#p680303?
Just a short, where I'm trying out something new.

Thanks,
~Lava
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I want you to review my new piece of work. It's romantic fiction, but the romance hasn't started yet. Well, the story is called The Orphanage. The main plot hasn't started quite yet, either, though.. Here's a link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60955.html And you'll find a link to the first part of the first chapter too. Thanks.
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Mmkay, sorry, forgot to say that I was on holiday! Lava, yours is reviewed. Bubble, I'll get to yours tomorrow!

And, let requests come forth!
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Could you please review this for me please?
It's kind of a random chapter though... is that okay?
It's Fantasy Fiction, by the way :wink:

Thanks

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Hi Amy!
Could you review this for me please?
It's under Fantasy.
Here's the link: topic61818.html
Thanks! :D
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So I think everything's done! Hope the reviews were ok; as always, PM me with any questions.

Now hit me with moar, people!
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*bumps this baby up*

Did I mention that, er, I'd like some requests?

No?

I'd like some requests, 'kay? :wink:
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If you would I would like you to review my fan fiction novel. it is based on the tv series Legion of Superheroes. i am posting the link to the first part. topic62680.html
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Done!

I'm hungry. Fill me with reviews! *rawrs*
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Hey! Basically anything on my profile can be reviewed. So... go to there! I don't feel like posting links.


If you do review my various fictions, I shall love you for forever and ever. I pinky promise. Pwease? I'll review ANYTHING you need me to. At all. Or at least, I'll try...
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Okaaaay, so I'm going to declare this officially open, even though it wasn't officially closed. That means the requests can start pouring coming in!

As said on the main post, I review pretty much anything. I can change the style of my review however you'd like it. Basically, I'm pretty flexible with reviews.

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Tell me what you think of this:

Link: topic64723.html

Thanks in advance, Aqua! In exchange, can I call Prince Eric for you? hee-hee... sadly, you're no mermaid at all.hahahaha! XD
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Sure thing, guys.
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Wow, when I came here, I was thinking about just putting one piece at a time on (I've got two) but then came along that 'I'm hungry. Fill me with reviews! *rawrs*' and I decided to tame the savage beast...with more work. :D

viewtopic.php?t=64040
Here's one, and...
post702053.html#p702053
Here's the other.

Tanks!
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