Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

Hey amy, it's me again I really appreciated your review. I was quite nervous to write my next chapter because I realised I hadn't really put some drama in like you and a lot of my other reviewers mentioned, and I kinda felt quite pressurised to put some drama in. Anyway, It's been difficult but I've finally put up chapter 9, so I hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on whether it's enough, if it's not I may stop writing as it's difficult to keep readers interested in a long story. Anyway, thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post651464.html (chapter 9

*coco

Hi Amy!

Could you review this piece? ^_^
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It's called the descent. It's a piece of fantasy fiction.

Hi Amy, wondering if you could review this for me, it's called The Elemental Guardians and it's under Fantasy Fiction.
Here's the link
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Done!

Hey there are actually a few things that you could review...take your pick:

1) Triston's proposal-A girl's gaurdian angel proposes to her (Warning: It's in the middle of a chapter in the middle of the book but it's gotten the best reviews out my posts)
Under romantic fiction and labeled as Triston's proposal

2) The Truth about roses and violets-it's not corny, I promise.
Under Dramatic poetry and labeled The Truth about Roses and Violets

3)Molly's home-Also a segment of my novel that just talks about my characters living environment.
Under Romantic Fiction and labeled Molly's home.

You don't have to look at all of them I just wanted to give you options. And also, take your time

Thanks
~Molly

Hey Amy!

Could you please review this for me?
It's Lyric Poetry and it's called Little Missy

Thanks so much

Hey, could you do me a favor and critique this. It's my fantasy novel(the first chapter). If you will, thanks.

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*bumps* Go ahead, I need to critique.

Amy! Would you be so kind as to review this? It's a poem in Other Fiction.

Thanks!

Amy! You're really popular. Sorry to add to the baggage but:

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Could you review that? Thanks.

Done both!

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Thank you.

I don't know if you review scripts, but I'll be very glad if you take a look at it.
I'm still kind of new when it comes to writing scripts. : )

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Hi! If you get the chance, can you review this? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post656509.html#p656509 It's Chapter One of one of my stories, Astianna. (Fantasy Fiction) It would much appreciated! Thanks-

KD

All done!