You Know You Want Some [re-opened]

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Demeter
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:21 pm
Demeter says... · Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:21 pm
Rascalover, yours is finally done. :)

With that said, I re-open this thread. :D
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Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:03 pm
Demeter says... · Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:03 pm
It is done.
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"14. Pretend like you would want him even if he wasn't a prince. (Yeah, right.)" -How to Make a Guy Like You - Disney Princess Style

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Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:14 pm
Lord Anzius says... · Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:14 pm
Please review this I'll give you a cookie :D

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Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:42 pm
Demeter says... · Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:42 pm
Hey, peoples – no line! :)
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"14. Pretend like you would want him even if he wasn't a prince. (Yeah, right.)" -How to Make a Guy Like You - Disney Princess Style

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Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:39 am
Anna09 says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:39 am
I have a short story that is streamline fiction I suppose :)
I am in desperate need of a detailed review, as it is both a school project, and something that I hope to submit to magazines.

topic44396.html

Thanks so much!! :D :D :D




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Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:05 pm
Lauren says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:05 pm
Hi, Dem :D I feel so cheeky asking, but would you review this for me? It's Other Fiction. I will return the favour.
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Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:08 pm
asxz says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:08 pm
Hi, Demeter! Could you please review these for me?
Prologue, Part 1
Prologue, Part 2
Prologue, Part 3.

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Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:41 pm
Galerius says... · Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:41 pm
Hello, I would appreciate it if you critiqued my newest poem: topic43953.html

Please be harsh, I beg of you.




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Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:46 am
Lost_in_dreamland says... · Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:46 am
Could you possibly review this for me, Demi? :D I will most definitely return the favour, just remember to bug me about it. xD
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Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:33 am
Demeter says... · Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:33 am
Of course!

I have still asxz's number three and Galerius' to do, and I'll be away the whole day, but I'll get to them soon!
"Your jokes are scarier than your earrings." -Twit

"14. Pretend like you would want him even if he wasn't a prince. (Yeah, right.)" -How to Make a Guy Like You - Disney Princess Style

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Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:29 pm
Demeter says... · Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:29 pm
All done.

No line... *nudge nudge*
"Your jokes are scarier than your earrings." -Twit

"14. Pretend like you would want him even if he wasn't a prince. (Yeah, right.)" -How to Make a Guy Like You - Disney Princess Style

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Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:19 pm
Twit says... · Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:19 pm
The Kingdom is Departed [1]

First chapter, please? :D It's ALTERNATE HISTORY.

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Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:23 am
Clo says... · Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:23 am
Hey Dem--

topic45041.html

With a cherry on top! :D
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