Hi, This is my prologue, compleatly re-woked and such! I am sorry if I missed out any one of your comments, I tried to make this as clear as possible. I also added in a little about what happens before the chase. That's basically what this part is about.
Since I didn't actually write the first prologue for a book, I was changing it around a lot here. (That's why it is in a new topic.) Oh, any this is my 250th post, so I thought I would do something special with it, like... I dunno, post a piece of my work!
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From the dim light that escaped the corridor, I knew that another step would be a death sentence.
Hoarse voices bounced off the walls and down the gloomy stairwell. They were still coming for me. That itself wasn’t a surprise, only that they hadn’t yet caught or cornered me. That was about to change, I decided as I took a weary look down the short staircase and into the basement tunnels. It took all of my concentration to keep myself from tripping as I jumped down the stairs. Back in the depths of my mind, I knew that my and the others attempts at freedom were undeniably useless.
I automatically thought back to the moment I had woken up; what seemed like my whole life was flashing before me in an instant.
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Sheer terror had ripped through me and it took great effort to keep my insides were they belong. I knew what was happening instantly, it was like I had been told sub-consciously what they were doing to me, to us all. I sat up, rustling the stale linen sheets that could have been there for years. Looking around the room, I saw dozens of beds just like mine, with extremely pale and corpse-like bodies lying at rest.
Was I too late?
No. The one opposite me was breathing slightly. I watched her chest go up and down, sighing in the relief that I wasn’t responsible for lives being taken. Regardless of the fact that I knew what they were doing was bad, I still knew nothing of who they were, or what precisely they were doing. I knew, though, that it was too late to sit around and ponder my situation while they could be walking down the hallway for a monthly check up.
I pulled back the covers in one swift movement and jumped over the railing of my hospital bed. The next bed over was barely half a meter away, so I couldn’t help but look down at a sleeping teen, no older than fifteen. Tears welled up in my throat as I realized that I had no idea how to free her from the terrible nightmare.
Should I pull the plug?
That was what they say on TV, wasn’t it? I silently laughed at the fact that I could recall endless hours of boring and pointless soap operas, but not when I watched them or where. I curled back a thin strand of sandy blond hair, and rested my head on my hand.
What was I to do?
As cruel as it may sound, I knew that I couldn’t save them all, and if I killed this one, I could always try and save the next. I looked down at her, she seemed familiar. I tried to think back, but I found no answers and no recollection of this girl. I found nothing in fact, before the moment I woke up.
Perplexion, the drip, darkness.
What was my name? What country was I in? How did I get here, and why me? The questions were a never ending bombardment of water over a cliff. Each question buried me deeper until I was literally gasping for air; clawing my way out of the uncertainty. My eyes opened without me aware that I had closed them, and I fought my way to regain order. Questions can come later. Once I free the others, we could work together.
Once again, I found myself looking at my companion. Referring back to my scarce time, I interlocked my fingers and held them over her chest. With one last gulp of air, I brought them down on her sparsely breathing form and preformed a rugged version of CPR.
It won’t help, I thought. She’s in a coma or something, it’s not like she’s choking or drowning.
After a few ineffectual attempts, I moved my attention to the needle that pierced her elbows interior. With shaking arms I grasped the cord that attached it to a bag hanging by her side, and pulled. The needle came out with effortless ease, and at once she opened her eyes. Like me, she was fully awake by some bizarre miracle.
While I left her to get going, I rushed across the ward and pulled out more drips, hardly looking at the waking bodies. I could not, however fail to notice the striking resemblance to the first girl. The short, sandy brown hair and the square jaw were all the same. They even all had blue eyes, and a slightly offset nose. They were exact copies. Without even having to check, I knew that I would be the same. We were all the same. I bottled the emotions that surged through me. Fear, confusion and above all, a sense of self worthlessness. If there were a dozen others like you, would you still be unique?
The others were helping out now, pulling out the needles. Soon, everyone in the ward was awake. I couldn’t help but feel we were being watched, and our time was running out. I glided effortlessly through the room, trying to push out that hospital feel, even though I had no recollection of being in a hospital. I didn’t have any memory at all, and perhaps that is the reason I was dragged down by the rubbery smell and the railing above the beds. It took my best control not to cry out in pain, let the fear and despair loose in the miserable room. I looked through the one and only window in the room, I gazed upon the compound. We were on the first story of a building that could be plentiful in height; Judging by the other blocks that I could see. There might be hundreds of other sleeping teenagers, waiting to wake up and discover themselves, just like me.
Were they all the same, or did appearance vary from room to room? A slight movement caught my eye, and I immediately jumped away from the glass.
“Guys,” I addressed my look-alikes. “We need to get out of here. People are coming. Heaps of people. Split up and meet by the nearest McDonald’s you can find as soon as you loose them, that’s if they follow, of course.” Again, I was helped out by knowledge that I didn’t know existed until the words were out of my mouth, but thinking that they would know just as much as me, I dished out the instructions.
No sooner than the words had left my mouth, the girls in the room ran towards me, fighting for a hurried glance through the window. Each sprinted for the door at the far end of the room, after seeing the men outside.
Instinct was shouting for me to follow suit, but I had a nagging feeling that I should hang back. I hadn’t counted the figures as they advanced towards us, but there couldn’t be that many. If two followed each girl preceding me, then I might get a lucky break and be able to run away Scott free.
I surveyed the room once more, making sure that my job was done, when I caught a glimpse of an abnormality. I rushed over to the bed in the middle of the room, and stared hard until the mystery revealed itself.
Lying on the bed was the syringe, neatly placed just beside the safety-rail.
That was my bed.
Of all the things you can recognize, the bed you woke up in is towards the top of the list.
Is this why I woke up? Did someone take my needle out?
Why did taking the needle out release me from this sleep?
No. It didn’t make sense. I must have knocked it out when I was asleep, if you could call it sleeping. I disregarded the information and turned towards the door. Through the exit was a stairwell, and I immediately had the noble thought of waking up the entire building. No. I couldn’t do that. I had to survive. I didn’t know what might happen to me if I left the compound, without money, without shelter and without an identity, but I shuddered at the alternative. Just what would that be? I had absolutely no idea, but it seemed worse than anything that could happen to me in the real world, worse even, than lying in bed for years on end with no thoughts and no life.
I rubbed my arms from the breeze as I walked through the open door into the world, the chase was on…
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