Brief description of what has happened before: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.
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Please review thanks, Tiffany
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Would you do me the honour of reviewing an extract from my Non-fiction column-based book? I'd like to know if you enjoyed the humour of it! Anyway here's the link: (I have two extracts, I don't mind if you review either one or both! ) topic57357.html "It's a Disaster." topic57293.html "The Problem With It is." Thankies! Ben.
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