So, I feel so bad about this, but your review was really, really awesome, so... I just wrote a new short story, The Thirteenth Month. It's rated 16+, but no mature content, not really, I think... It deals with suicide, so I thought I should rate it 16+ (no cussing or sexual content).
If you could review that story, I would love it if you could focus on these things; tone of the story, character development, what you thought about how the story was formatted, and the feeling that the overall story gave to you. Again, if that is too much, you can do whatever you feel is necessary.
@mephistophelesangel, as long as you give me a few days to catch up, giving me more than one request is finee! Thank you for your compliments. c: I try hard.
Expect the review within a day or so - hopefully tonight.
Hi there! Ive got a few chapters o a novel posted, but everything but the last chapter (Chapter 22 of The Token) has been reviewed, but you can look at whatever you like! I don't mind!
You clearly don't know who you're talking to, so let me clue you in: I am not in danger, Skyler. I am the danger. A guy opens his door and gets shot, and you think that of me? No! I am the one who knocks! -Walter White
Hey, @steward. I want to make sure that you're correct in what you want from me. A critique-critique review? If you want, since it seems you have gotten lots of positive feedback, I can skip saying anything nice except perhaps a sentence or so telling you I do like the piece, and just spend all of my time there showing you what you can do to make the piece better.
My review for you is completely flexible. Whatever you want.
@TimmyJake yes please., I really need critique-critique., skip the blah if you want., thank you! oh, and this work had to be 450 words or less., just thought that might shake the review up a bit
