PICK ME PICK ME - Timmy's Reviewing Endeavors • Young Writers Society

TimmyJake · 2013-12-25T14:55:04Z

Timmyjake here, Reviewing, quite honestly, is all that I do on YWS. Everything else is an occasional distraction. I love reviewing any genre - yes, even extremely dramatic pieces, or fanfiction (I love 'em all) - and will leave you a shiny review if you ask for one. I can do many forms of reviews. If you ask for a break-down of every issue the piece could possibly have - I will deliver to the best of my ability. I can give you a review based only on plot and characters, to give you an idea of what you want to work on there. If you ask for merely a short review. Well, I can do those too. So in your post, be sure to note what kind of review you want. Trust me, it makes a difference. Both for you and for me. So let's get this thing going! I love reviewing, and I love reading. Sooo... that is why I review at least twice a day. So give me your pieces. It won't be long. I can give you your review in less than a day - most of the time. Others will take a while longer. :) Before we get going, please remember and take into consideration that I can refuse to review your work. There are several reason why I may refuse, but mature content(16+) is probably the biggest. I dun do that. Thanks! Let the requests begin.

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Sat Sep 06, 2014 8:59 pm

Cithara says... · Sat Sep 06, 2014 8:59 pm

Might as well give you something to review ^^
~~ok you review almost all of my works, but I really wanna see what you have to say about this~~
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but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
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Sat Sep 06, 2014 9:00 pm

TimmyJake says... · Sat Sep 06, 2014 9:00 pm

Will get to it soon, @TheWriter13!!! *yes, I should be online*

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Sun Sep 07, 2014 2:06 am

TimmyJake says... · Sun Sep 07, 2014 2:06 am

Dooone! Who's next?

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Sun Sep 07, 2014 3:40 pm

Evander says... · Sun Sep 07, 2014 3:40 pm

Misused and Abused (1)

I wrote this when I was... nine or so. This is Harry Potter fanfiction and the grammar is terrible. (Though, I don't want the review to say I should edit this. Because, I'm not going back to edit it.

I would rather not taint the work with older, more experienced me.) I can review something of yours in exchange!

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Thu Sep 11, 2014 10:08 pm

TakeThatYouFiend says... · Thu Sep 11, 2014 10:08 pm

Sweet Tunes Like
And here's some lyrics to read (and *like* he added unscrupulously)

You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?

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Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:55 pm

TimmyJake says... · Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:55 pm

Both Completed! Who's next?

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Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:34 pm

ulala8 says... · Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:34 pm

Hey, I have a chapter of my novel that only has one review and has been in the green room for a month now.

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Sun Sep 14, 2014 9:20 am

SpeedyPencil says... · Sun Sep 14, 2014 9:20 am

Hi I have a short story I'd love for you to review here: Queen Bee- any critique welcome

Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.

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Sun Sep 14, 2014 10:24 pm

TimmyJake says... · Sun Sep 14, 2014 10:24 pm

All done! Who's next?

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Wed Jan 07, 2015 3:31 pm

TimmyJake says... · Wed Jan 07, 2015 3:31 pm

Still open for requestsssss....

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Wed Jan 07, 2015 10:55 pm

mephistophelesangel says... · Wed Jan 07, 2015 10:55 pm

Hello!

Um, I would love it if you could review a short story of mine... It's kind of lengthy, but... I would love some feedback on it.

No World for Villains

Yep, there's the link. I'm really wondering if the plot makes sense to people or not... It made complete sense inside my head, but I am really curious (terrified) to see if people can understand what just happened there.

I would also love it if you could touch upon the tone of the story, the character development, and how it made you feel reading it (what you think about how the overall story turned out).

Is that too much??