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Hi Timmy! Can you review this for me? I got a couple of okay reviews, but I'd like one more in depth.

As The World Falls
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
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@meandbooks and @haven235, it will be a few days - perhaps even up to a week as I have been lazy lately, and am struggling to catch back up. But don't worry! I'll get to you as soon as possible. c:
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Okay. :) Take all the time you need.
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
-EternalRain

I think you, @Deanie and I are like the Three Book Nerd Musketeers of YWS.
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Hey Timmy!

Could you review this for me? I'd like a complete break down of every issue kind of review, if that's okay with you.

Thanks!

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I'm sorry, @unconsoled. My YWS time has been very very much decreased, so I'm not sure if I can get to it, but I'll do my best. :)
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You can review my stuff anytime you want to =). It always needs some work. It can be a day, it can be a week, even a month or year until you do it. It doesn't matter.

o.o Maybe I shouldn't have said that. You might not get to it =P
One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.

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Please review.
The Summoning: Chapter 3
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9/2/05

Gots a twofer fer ya. They be songs though. Thankee.




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Please review Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]! It's part one of the short story. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Hey, Timmy. Would you be so kind as to review my novel chap. for me? The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1 Thanks so much! :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

Review link below!
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Hey there, could you please review

Starlight: Prologue

Thanks in advance !




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I'll do my best! Not on YWS as much as I used to, but I'll try. :)
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Hey, I'd love a detailed review of my newest poem. Feel free to nitpick if you want - just review it however you feel is best (you're the expert) :)

Thanks in advance!

An Ocean Death Would Be So Beautiful
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining



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