The Chapter List is co-run by both ItallianIlluminist (Ita) and I to help keep rthe reviews flowing and the chapters read. Though, Ita's review style might not fit your desired style but will still greatly improve your work. He specialises in grammar and grammatical techniques.
Have you ever noticed how the first couple of chapters in your novel almost always get a decent supply of reviews, but later in your story, you find your chapters spending a lot of time in the no review pile? If so, then keep reading! The Chapter List is a review shop for all those unreviewed later chapters (I also do poetry). Just read the terms and conditions below and request away!
Here at the Chapter list, I will review just about anything as long it isn't on the black list, though I mainly review novel chapters and poetry. My reviewing style is rather flexible and I am more than happy to customize my review for you (see review styles). I prefer fantasy and action, though I do review romance and comedy. If you have any questions, feel free to post on my wall or PM me. Also, if you are unsatisfied with your review, I will surely give you a full refund and remove my review from your work.
Please don't request ongoing chapter reviews on more than one series at a time.
Review Styles:
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Note: A summary review is a small review about a paragraph long explaining why I did or didn't like the piece.
1. The Writer's Grammar Check (Only for users who have been on YWS for less than 3 months.)
A summary review and an extensive spelling and grammar check.
2. Second Draft, Second Opinion
In this review, I treat the piece like my own and edit it as I would when creating a new draft. This review also contains a summary review.
3. YWS Critique Sandwich
An explnation can be found here.
4. Editors Pick
A calm, but useful review that picks out the best and the worst of the piece. This is usually 3 paragraphs or more in length and can also cover plot over the span of previous chapters.
5. The Lemon
A thorough and sometimes harsh review that is just like the fruit - sweet and pleasant when mixed with sugar, but it stings like all when when squeezed into the eyes.
6. The Slaughterhouse
In this review, your piece will be absolutely chewed to bits, and hopefully, come out a tasty, flavoursome steak at the end. This review is usually accompanied by many smileys to ease any pain.
7. The Custom Job
A completely custom review where you tell me what you want to know.
1. The Writer's Grammar Check (Only for users who have been on YWS for less than 3 months.)
A summary review and an extensive spelling and grammar check.
2. Second Draft, Second Opinion
In this review, I treat the piece like my own and edit it as I would when creating a new draft. This review also contains a summary review.
3. YWS Critique Sandwich
An explnation can be found here.
4. Editors Pick
A calm, but useful review that picks out the best and the worst of the piece. This is usually 3 paragraphs or more in length and can also cover plot over the span of previous chapters.
5. The Lemon
A thorough and sometimes harsh review that is just like the fruit - sweet and pleasant when mixed with sugar, but it stings like all when when squeezed into the eyes.
6. The Slaughterhouse
In this review, your piece will be absolutely chewed to bits, and hopefully, come out a tasty, flavoursome steak at the end. This review is usually accompanied by many smileys to ease any pain.
7. The Custom Job
A completely custom review where you tell me what you want to know.
Constraints:
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The Black List
What I won't review:
- Fanfiction
- Non-Fiction
- Horror
- Lyrics
- Scripts
The Amber List
What I might review:
- Short Stories
- Anything With Too Much Gore
- Anything in Other
What I won't review:
- Fanfiction
- Non-Fiction
- Horror
- Lyrics
- Scripts
The Amber List
What I might review:
- Short Stories
- Anything With Too Much Gore
- Anything in Other
Request Form:
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Terms and Conditions:
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1. I as noninjaspresent under any alias reserve the right to deny a request and withhold a review with or without a reason at your notification (either by PM, a post on your wall, or on this topic); 2. All reviews by noninjaspresent remain the sole physical and intellectual property of noninjaspresent; 3. By subscribing for an ongoing review of chapters, you agree to post valid links to your work in this topic and agree to notify me if you wish the reviews to stop or if you stop posting chapters for that work; 4. I reserve the right to remove all reviews if you fail to comply to condition 3; 5. By requesting my services you agree to have read these terms and conditions and agree to comply to them as so; 6. ItalianIlluminist reserves the same rights as noninjaspresent in this forum, and, by agreeing, you henceforth comply to any additional terms he may enforce for whatever reason, specified or not.
Requests:
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Broken On Hold
Eric Accepted
Subject 47 Accepted
The Fire Princess - Arinalgar Accepted
Sazerac Pending
But I shall get at least two done before Wednesday next week.
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