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wordsandwishes
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Mon Jun 25, 2012 1:25 pm
wordsandwishes says... · Mon Jun 25, 2012 1:25 pm
Hi there! I was wondering if you'd review this poem I wrote recently, here's some info:
Title: People
Genre: Realistic/Other

Hope you like it!

w&w




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Twit
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Tue Jun 26, 2012 2:21 pm
Twit says... · Tue Jun 26, 2012 2:21 pm
Done everyone!
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Shady
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Fri Jun 29, 2012 4:22 am
Shady says... · Fri Jun 29, 2012 4:22 am
Hey Twit!

I am here because I've heard that you win at reviews :D

Anyway, a review for this piece (sorry, I don't know how to make it a pretty link) work.php?id=95999 would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!

~Shadow

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Twit
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Fri Jun 29, 2012 12:48 pm
Twit says... · Fri Jun 29, 2012 12:48 pm
Done ShadowVyper!
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Eliza:)
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Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:07 pm
Eliza:) says... · Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:07 pm
Hi. Can you review: work.php?id=96355 ?

Thanks.
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Twit
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Mon Jul 16, 2012 11:39 pm
Twit says... · Mon Jul 16, 2012 11:39 pm
Done Eliza! Anyone else?
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artsy
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Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:03 am
artsy says... · Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:03 am
Could you give me one on
The Conjurer Wars-1?

Much appreciated! ^^
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Twit
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Tue Jul 17, 2012 10:20 pm
Twit says... · Tue Jul 17, 2012 10:20 pm
Done artsy!
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Lothbrok
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Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:30 pm
Lothbrok says... · Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:30 pm
Can you review this for me please
work.php?id=95339
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DudeMcGuy
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Sat Jul 21, 2012 9:22 pm
DudeMcGuy says... · Sat Jul 21, 2012 9:22 pm
Hello Twit,

Here once again to request a review of Ch.5 whenever you have the time and inkling to tackle it.
(part 1) work.php?id=96481
(part 2) work.php?id=96482

Your usual expertise would be greatly appreciated :) . Thanks!
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Shady
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Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:25 pm
Shady says... · Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:25 pm
Wow! It's true! You do win at reviews!

I just wanted to tell you that, and that I love you too...and that I need a non-fiction review.

work.php?id=96620

Please?

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Twit
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Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:04 pm
Twit says... · Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:04 pm
Lothbrok, Dude and Vyper--all done!
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Shady
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Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:15 pm
Shady says... · Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:15 pm
I am back with Chapter Two!

work.php?id=96633

Thanks! :D

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]




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Valentine
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Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:03 am
Valentine says... · Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:03 am
Be sweet if you'd review this: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96649

Its called the other side of the glass. This is just part one but its just a short story.
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ImHero
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Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:38 pm
ImHero says... · Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:38 pm
Hey twitt:) can you give me a review on my poem ? :)

work.php?id=96570
new profile: profile.php?u=36729

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