I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
I have been reading several of your reviews and I must say I am very impressed. So I would be honored if you would take a shot at this: work.php?id=94743
It's a little long (3000+ words), so sorry about that. It's my first attempt at writing fiction, but please don't go easy. Let me know how bad it really is. I'm sure I made tons of mistakes that I am not aware of.
Of course I am willing to wait until you have reviewed everyone's work that was posted before mine.
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I
Hey Twit! Please review this piece work.php?id=94811 for me. It's called 'The Hawk' and is sort of a fictional discriptive short story. Thanks!
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
