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DudeMcGuy
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Thu Sep 20, 2012 2:43 am
DudeMcGuy says... · Thu Sep 20, 2012 2:43 am
Hi again Twit,

I can't believe I haven't posted here in almost two months! I've been slacking too much for sure. Anyway, I'm here to request reviews for the next part of my story, Ch. 6.

work.php?id=97366
work.php?id=97367

I see there are a few others ahead of me, so please take as long as you need. I'll be patient because you're the best :)

Thanks again!
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I




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Justlittleoleme
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Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:15 pm
Justlittleoleme says... · Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:15 pm
Dear twit,

Please please please review this first chapter of my novel. It's not much and it is the first thing I've written in months but I'm literally dieing for someone to take an honest look at it. :3

work.php?id=97461
Last edited by Justlittleoleme on Wed Sep 26, 2012 7:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Shady
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Wed Sep 26, 2012 7:24 pm
Shady says... · Wed Sep 26, 2012 7:24 pm
Hey Twit!

As Dude put it, I feel like a bit of a slacker as well...but I've finally got Ch. 4 up (I'll take him some day ;) )

Anyway, here's the link: work.php?id=97470

I'll be patient too, because, well, I agree with Dude- you're the best.

Thanks! :D

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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DudeMcGuy
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Sat Oct 20, 2012 4:33 pm
DudeMcGuy says... · Sat Oct 20, 2012 4:33 pm
Hi Twit,

How is Uni treating you? I'm here today to request a review for Ch.7. Whenever you have time of course :) .

Part 1: work.php?id=97368
Part 2: work.php?id=97369

Thanks!
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I




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WritingWolf
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Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:41 am
WritingWolf says... · Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:41 am
Could I please have a review for my poem Looking in?
~You can only grasp what you reach for~




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Shady
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Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:49 pm
Shady says... · Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:49 pm
Hey Twit!

I'd appreciate a review on this poem: work.php?id=98198

It's called: Christmas Spirit

and I hope it's somewhat humorous.

Thanks!

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]




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Lycando
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Thu Dec 13, 2012 2:18 pm
Lycando says... · Thu Dec 13, 2012 2:18 pm
Hey twit, review this for me please? Thanks! :)

work.php?id=98281

It's a short story.
Insert certain quote here from some terribly famous and renowned great scientist/philosopher/actor who is now dead and so his/her words shall carry on -Lycando

Yes you have a story? Yes you want a review? Yes please click here.




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Kafkaescence
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Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:32 pm
Kafkaescence says... · Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:32 pm
work.php?id=98364

This and future installments could use reviews.
#TNT

WRFF




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indieeloise
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Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:41 pm
indieeloise says... · Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:41 pm
I am planning on sending this in the form of a condolence letter to the families of those involved in the Sandy Hook incident, so it's really important to me to be as perfect as possible... I would really love a nitpicky review, and feel free to be as harsh as possible! work.php?id=98404
Thank you!
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco




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Twit
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Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:34 pm
Twit says... · Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:34 pm
Finally, everybody done!
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Twit
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Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:53 pm
Twit says... · Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:53 pm
*le bump, yo*
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BenGrange
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Wed Feb 27, 2013 12:25 am
BenGrange says... · Wed Feb 27, 2013 12:25 am
Hi Twit!

I was told by ShadowViper that you give killer reviews. I'm wondering if you would be willing to take a few minutes to review the first few chapters of my book, and give me an honest critique on how I can improve my writing. It's an original Children's fantasy/adventure.

Here is the link to my story:

profile/BenGrange/portfolio

Let me know what you think. Thanks!

BenGrange
"If you really want something, no one can stop you. If you don't want something, then no one can help you." ~ James A. Owen




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ShakespeareWallah
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Thu Mar 21, 2013 5:43 am
ShakespeareWallah says... · Thu Mar 21, 2013 5:43 am
Hey Twit,

I'd love a review on this : work.php?id=100328

thanks,
Puck.

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