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Sorry it was late, but I finished it, Pteura :)
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Any new requests? :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Well, you asked for it.

Though, you know, you didn't ask for that specifically and I feel sorry for you, having to review it. :mrgreen:
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Alright, Twit, its done!

So, anymore requests? :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Hey Dreamwalker! I'd appreciate it if you could review Smoke and Fire: One, it's a fantasy novel chapter. Many thanks,

Tiger
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Hello there, Dreamwalker.

Could you review this poem of mine for me?

Thank you.

*ehte*
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Just keep pullin' up my sleeves xD. Any more review requests? :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Hey dreamwalker, would you mind reviewing this chapter in my novel?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic79459.html

I appreciate that its chapter 5, so it might not make that much sense to you, but any kind of comments would be very welcome!

Thanks




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Hey, Dreamy! (You're gonna hate me for this)

Would you mind reviewing the beginning of a novel for me? I've already got a huge ton of reviews as you'll see if you accept this request, but I've recently re-edited it, so I'd love to get some fresh opinions on the whole thing. It's a little long too... so that may put you off. It's general fiction, by the way.

Here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=72983

If you don't want to review it for whatever reason though, that's totally cool with me. I would understand, taking into account it's length and what not. >.<

Please and thank you!
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Romance novel ( no sexual parts) link is in the end thanks :)
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ohmygosh you seem coool! so manyyy requests!

Can you please please please review my poem!??? :smt001 :smt001 :smt001 :smt001 :smt001 :smt001 :smt001

topic79904.html

^Right there hahaha! I'm excited for reviews! :D




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Please, please,please read my novel, the shift. It science fiction. You can find it on my portfolio. Kthnxbai! :)




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Will you review my poem for me please?
viewtopic.php?t=80498
Thanks!

Congrats on the Featured Member, by the way.
Hi :)




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Dreamwalker!
Hope you aren't bogged down by requests. Could you peek at my poerty attempt? (viewtopic.php?t=80551)
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

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Hey Dreamwalker, you recently reviewed one of my pieces called Smoke and you said you hoped to see more of my work, well I posted a piece a while back and I would very much appreciate it if you took a look at it.

It's called: A Call to Arms

Thank you. :)



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