Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
LaPetitePrincess wrote:Hi! Would you remind reviewing this short story of mine? Of Secrets and Illusions Thank you!
Done and done. Let me know if you want anything else done or have any questions, yeah
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Hey Walker I have a story called Return to Nothing. Its a Fantasy story that deals with my own original characters and characters from mythology. I would really appreciate if you could review and give me a few critiques thanks. Return to Nothing Draft
Hey there, Dreamwalker! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.
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Would you remind reviewing this short story of mine? Of Secrets and Illusions
