Young Writers Society

Hey Walker,
I know I asked you to do my novel but I have this really short piece I need reviewed (and basically torn apart) and I am a fan of your reviews, soooo, if you get the chance and feel like a short story, that would be awesome!

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~Dakota Knight

Would you mind reviewing the start of my newest novel The First Son for me? The link is there. It's a new project and still a little unsteady as of yet, but I think I like where I might be going with it.

Feedback on my first chapter would be really great, especially since I haven't devoted myself to a novel work in awhile. The first chapter is more so the introduction to the gist of my story, in case you read and find it completely pointless seeming. D: I usually have reason for the way I set up most of my stories, but I'm always open to opinions/suggestions.

Anyway, thank you! Take your time if you need.

I've posted Chapter 2. It's a bit shorter than I expected so keep in mind I may add further onto it. If you happen to have an idea what the chapter can benefit using, I'd be stoked to hear your thoughts for help.

Dream-person! <3 I feel so weird actually being on this forum right now. oo"

You said that you're an avid novel follower? Weelll, I've just started a new novel, and I would absolutely adore if you could pretty please review the first chapter? :3 I'm not totally sure about it, (I don't feel like I've done the character justice. At all), so rip it apart as you see fit.

All the Perfect Colors

Thank you! ^^

Posted my first draft of Chapter 3. It's a lot thicker of a chapter. No rush on getting to it, since Ch. 2 was lengthened and I'm not sure if you've gotten to it yet. But it'll probably be awhile until I post a new chapter anyway. Thanks a bunch. ^-^

Hello!

I'd like to ask, do you review fanfiction novels? I posted the first chapter, and since it kinda contains nothing from the series it's based on (it's an original character introduction chapter), I thought it'd be readable for everyone. However I don't think I'll post other chapters here.

If you don't mind, just take a look and let me know if you could review it
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I'd just like to know if I'm going in the right direction.
Thank you!

I'd love a dreamy review with whipped creamon the side please?

I know you're working on novel chapters right now, but I was wondering if you could bend the rules a little? Even if I'm extra good?

You don't have to, it's just an enquiry so don't stress if you don't feel like working on short stories at the moment.
If you do however, I'd have you look at this please.

It's short, maybe minorly confusing and probably not very interesting but I'll leave all of that up to you.

I appreciate and again, if you can't-no bother at all!

Kagi

Looks like I've got my itinerary for this review day! Expect your finished reviews sometimes during sunday!

Well this has been dead for the past while!

Hi Dreamwalker!

If you have time, would you mind reviewing this, for me?
Any critiques and comments you have would be much appreciated.

Any new requests? I'm trying to get my first blue star, people ;D

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It's the first chapter of a novel. It's fantasy, though... Thanks so much! This means so much to me

Re-opened and now looking for poetry requests ;D.

Of course, anything else is fine!

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Here's a poem that desperately needs shredding, if you would. ^_^

Completed <3