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guess who's back, fam.

Things I Enjoy Reviewing
- Poetry (all varieties, especially lyrical and narrative)

Things I Will Review
- general fiction
- Art
- Romantic Fiction
- Fantasy Fiction
- Sci-fi
- Historical Fiction (depending on the topic)

Things you need to beg me I May Review
- Everything else

Things I won't review
- migratory bird patterns
- Fox News segments
- Guy Fieri's Vegas Kitchen and Bar

Rules:

- Proof-read your own work first, please.
- Do not give me the name of something you wish me to review without a link.
- Respect from both sides
- All for the low low price of your soul

I'm a little rusty so bear with me while I get my sea legs going. If you have any questions about my reviews and so on, feel free to PM me. I honestly don't bite.

(and appartently I've edited this thread over 98 times ??? dang me)

Thanks again!

DW
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Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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O hai dood. :mrgreen:

This is fantasy -- I hope that's up your street? viewtopic.php?t=77579
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Yep! I can do that one ;D
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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This is a poetry piece I recently posted. I would appreciate it immensely if you would take a look at it!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=77641
Thank you so much!
Oh, I wish I was punk-rocker with flowers in my hair.




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Okay, the one for Echoes is done. Now TL G-Wooster, I'm onto yours next :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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TL G-Wooster's is complete! Anymore requests? :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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MINE. Blackened Runes Review. NOW. XD
I am the workingman, the inventor, the maker of the world's food and clothes.
I am the audience that witnesses history.
- Carl Sandburg, I am the People, the Mob




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And complete! Anything else, anyone? ;D
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Please? ^^ Fantasy fic.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Here's the first chapter. Can't wait to see what you think.

P.S. I've also got the second chapter back up...
I am the workingman, the inventor, the maker of the world's food and clothes.
I am the audience that witnesses history.
- Carl Sandburg, I am the People, the Mob




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Rosey's review is done :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Alright, so I finished the first chapter for Noir. Anymore requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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And the second chapter is done... anyone want me to review anything? :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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YES. :) I'd love for you to review anything off my profile. I honestly don't care what it is. :D


(Other than the 'weird random stuff that doesn't make much sense' folder)

:) THANKS!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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;D can do. But, if I get obsessive compulsive all over your profile... well my bad.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S



Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath