Alright, so I believe I'm all caught up with my reviews? I think so!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
In advance, I was writing for up to four hours nonstop on the first one for 9 days or so, and I didn't stop to correct errors often... I went back and corrected some recently and have fixed most of the ones there were, but there's still a lot of uncapitalized letters at the beginning of sentences and forgetting to put periods at the end of dialogue... this one is about telepaths... viewtopic.php?t=80792 it's super long so take your time if u want... I haven't written in it much for awhile but I started working on it again recently... this one is science fiction... viewtopic.php?t=80824 basically there's a war going on and this pacifist inventor creates a cloning machine that he reluctantly uses for war...
"It ain't what you don't know that gets you into trouble. It's what you know for sure that just ain't so." -Mark Twain
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends. - Ethel Watts Mumford A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out. - Walter Winchell “I’ll Surprise you, I promise” -Adam Lambert
Ah, it always feels good to finish poetry reviews! Anymore requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Have I not commanded thee? Be strong and of good courage; be not afraid, neither be thou dismayed, for the lord thy God is with thee whithersoever thou goest.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Hi Dreamwalker, I have really enjoyed reading your work and I'm looking for a good reviewer to hunt through my novel and tear it apart. I'm desperate to either make this thing into something worthwhile or get rid of it if it's awful. I am awful at judging my own work. If you would be willing to take a stab at it that would be awesome! Thanks so much:)
Okay guys, so I know I'm behind in my reviews and I will catch up. Just I'm gone this weekend.
Sunday I should be up and running once more.
~Walker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Alright, so now its just the two novels! That means, it will take me a couple days, if not a week or two, to finish all of them. Its does mean, though, that I am up for more requests!
I do like novel reviewing, but one needs a break to do other reviews as well, ne? ;D
~Walker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Lots of times you have to pretend to join a parade in which you're not really interested in order to get where you're going. — Christopher Darlington Morley
