Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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Sins
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:39 am
Sins says... · Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:39 am
Everyone's reviews are done now except for yours, Ellie.

I'll be getting to that tomorrow!
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IsebellaLynnette
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:09 am
IsebellaLynnette says... · Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:09 am
Hi Skins. :) I would like to have one more opinion on my NaNo prologue (fantasy fiction) before I decide how to revise it. I would be ever so grateful if you would review it. :) And I'll review your novel. (XD major bribe)

Here's the link:
Against All Odds Prologue

Oh, and before I forget, I really don't mind what type of review you give me. I'll be happy with nit-picking, or general impression... whatever floats your boat. :D
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SilentRain
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Mon Dec 13, 2010 4:00 am
SilentRain says... · Mon Dec 13, 2010 4:00 am
Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ...

Click on the link for more details...

viewtopic.php?t=72999

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Sins
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 3:35 pm
Sins says... · Wed Dec 15, 2010 3:35 pm
Done, Isabella. :)

I'll have yours done soon hopefully, Rain.

While I'm in the process of reviewing Rain' request, I'm open for other requests.
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BenFranks
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:03 pm
BenFranks says... · Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:03 pm
Hullo Skins. It's been a long while since I've written anything, but can you check out the start to my new book? Would like to know about character/structure and content. Merci beaucoup Monsieur! :D

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Sunshine
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Sun Dec 19, 2010 2:53 am
Sunshine says... · Sun Dec 19, 2010 2:53 am
Here's a piece I wrote for a contest! Please check it out!
Link:
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spike71294
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Sun Dec 19, 2010 2:45 pm
spike71294 says... · Sun Dec 19, 2010 2:45 pm
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Can you review the first chapter of my novel 'Wings And Fins'?
It has only one review :(




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Sins
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Mon Dec 20, 2010 6:04 pm
Sins says... · Mon Dec 20, 2010 6:04 pm
All done!
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Tigersprite
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Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:52 pm
Tigersprite says... · Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:52 pm
Hey Skinsy! Now I need some of your reviewing expertise. :D

Can you review the Prologue of Rebirth? I need some feedback so that I know it's okay. It's pretty short, so no worries about trudging through a long story. ;)

Tiger
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Sins
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 5:45 pm
Sins says... · Tue Dec 21, 2010 5:45 pm
Done! ^_^
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MiaParamore
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:07 pm
MiaParamore says... · Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:07 pm
Hey there, Skins. Finally you're free, and before someone else requests, I am going to post---because I won't share you now. xD! Just kidding, 'kay?

You've reviewed the prologue and chapter-1 of my shared novel with Lily, but now it's on my account, I am doing it alone and the name's changed. Gosh, I am tired of explaining. Okay, so here's the chapter-2: Know I'm Here(2)

~Shubhi

P.S. Thanks!
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HostofHorus
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Wed Dec 22, 2010 2:49 am
HostofHorus says... · Wed Dec 22, 2010 2:49 am
Hi there Skins!
I would be quite thankful if you would review my work with your pretty badges and all. :) You can do a mix of nit pick and overall, or whatever you like. Anything is helpful! It is entitled "The Feeling of Christmas." Hope you like it! :wink:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73587.html
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)




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Sins
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:00 pm
Sins says... · Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:00 pm
Done. 8)
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BenFranks
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:13 pm
BenFranks says... · Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:13 pm
Here y'are Skins. Take a peek through this: viewtopic.php?t=73675

Tell us any thoughts :)



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