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Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3

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Fri Aug 20, 2010 6:54 am

SilentRain says...

I will review any poem that I am asked to...

I do my comments in colors so it is easy to understand.
Red- Grammer mistakes
Blue- Things I think you should change to make the poem better, in my opinion, or from my expereance.
Pink/purple- Things I really like
Green- Aditional comments

When I review a poem normally I will tell you if I liked it or not, what I liked and didn't like about it, why I liked or didn't like that, and what I think you could do to make it better. I can be kinda harsh, but I will always tell you why and how to improve.

Ok, this is one of the reveiws I've done if you want to see...
viewtopic.php?p=771448#p771448

I will only review poems so don't ask me to review a story or a book, okay?

Thank you, :smt003

<3

~Rain~

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Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!

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Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:24 am

SilentRain says...

Anyone!?!?!?! :?:

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Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!

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Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:40 am

SporkPunk says...

Hi! I was wondering if you could review my first attempt at poetry?

it began with a lump in the throat

Thanks in advance!

~Sporks

Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:36 am

blackbird12 says...

Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thanks in advance!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver

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Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:45 am

Calligraphy says...

Could you please review my poem? Diary

A thousand thanks,

A. S.

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Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:32 pm

Flower~Child says...

Will you review my poem for me? topic68412.html

My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

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Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:06 am

Margaret Louise says...

Can you please review this? Thanks! topic68836.html#p757343

There is so much said in the silence. But writing, for me, became a way of fighting the repression, of protecting no one, of saying everything. I began to write to save my own life.