Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

Hi! I was wondering if you could review my short romance story? Here it is if you have time. topic69557.html

The main things I want reviewed, are grammar, and plot if thats alright with you.

All of the reviews are done.

Do you think you could review some pictures? Please and thank you (I understand if you don't want to. Congrats on going green, by the way) topic71900.html
~peanut~

Yours is done, peanut!

Could you review myPhil paper please? Only if you want to though, the topic can be .....sensitive. I'm really stuck on this and I need help.

will you please review
my short story Fatal love
and the fire bird: here are the links:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71430< fatal love
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=717 < firebird

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

I will review in return since I'm low on points
~pointe
p.s. don't worry about grammer

All reviews are now done!

I'm free for requests again.

Hello my new-found friend. ;)

I wrote this for a contest (the deadline is this Saturday) and it's already undergone one major renovation, but there's still time for another if it needs it. Also, I will gladly return the favor if you tell me which of your pieces (other than Box Full of Dreams, of course!) you would like me to review.

The Forger's Apprentice
(In Fantasy Short Stories)

Thankee muchly!
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All done!

Skins! Could you review my poem please? It's the first one that I put up here. Can you nitpick and give me an overall review please? Thanks!http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post786357.html#p786357

Hey Skins, been a long time since I post this. So please review chapter 2 p. 2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. Thankies 8D

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Viola!

I'm free for review requests again.

Hey again Skins
Can you review one of my other novel: 'Till we meet Again. Thanks 8d
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Need you to rip this to shreds Skins: topic72264.html Thanks.

All done, my home skillin' biscuits.