Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

Sins · 2010-04-10T22:28:48Z

Hidere. My name's Skins and I review stuff. I mainly review fiction because it's the only thing I really know anything about, so this is mainly a fiction-based reviewing thread. If you really do want me to review any poetry, scripts, art, photography e.t.c. for you though, I'm happy to give it a shot. Just know that the review may not be the most professional one in the world. If you would like a review, simply post the link as a reply. I will try and get back to you as soon as possible .

occasionalpessimist

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Fri Dec 24, 2010 9:10 am

occasionalpessimist says... · Fri Dec 24, 2010 9:10 am

Hi! Can you please, please, please review my story 'Just Another Day'?
Just a general review, really. My grammar isn't that great, but that's something I *know* I have to work on.
- Alexandra

Link: topic73429.html#p797642

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Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:58 pm

Tigersprite says... · Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:58 pm

Hey Skeensy. Yup, I'm back again.

Can you review this for me? It's a contest entry (not yours, though

), so I need some serious critiquing so that it's up to scratch. Thanks in advance.

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Roal

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Fri Dec 24, 2010 10:54 pm

Roal says... · Fri Dec 24, 2010 10:54 pm

Rawr! Hey Skins! Can you please re-review ( I think? ) ch. 3 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer?
post800147.html
Thanks!
...
Oh!
And chapter 1? post799799.html
You don't have to for chapter 1 =3= Just if you feel like it.

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And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.

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Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:16 pm

Sins says... · Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:16 pm

Done!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

LindseyBrooke

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Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:00 am

LindseyBrooke says... · Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:00 am

Hey Skins! Review my prologue for me? topic73696.html
Thank you! (:

-Lindsey

"Next year I'll be transferred to Pigfarts."
<3

Lord Anzius

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Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:28 am

Lord Anzius says... · Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:28 am

Hullo

Would you review this piece for me?

Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part

)
It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69539.html#p763503

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Sins

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Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:40 pm

Sins says... · Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:40 pm

Viola! All done!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

psudiname

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Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:31 am

psudiname says... · Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:31 am

hey there, it's Psudiname, and I would like some of my stuff reviewed. if you could review the first three chapters of my unfinished novel i would be happy. I would especially like focus on plot, charecter development and style, and less focus on grammer and spelling. the links are included below:
topic73681.html
topic73742.html
topic73817.html

if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.

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Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:00 pm

Button says... · Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:00 pm

Hey, if you have some free time, could you please take a look at this?

viewtopic.php?t=74039

Thanks so much, Skins!

-Coral-

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Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:14 pm

Sins says... · Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:14 pm

Done, at last!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

Nightshade

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Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:49 pm

Nightshade says... · Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:49 pm

Hi Skins, I know poetry isn't your thing, but I've been impressed with your poetry reviews anyways

Would you be willing to look at one of my poems?
topic74123.html
Thanks!

Flower~Child

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Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:14 am

Flower~Child says... · Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:14 am

Hey Skinsy my darling. Would you mind reviewing my prologue?

topic74219.html

My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

Button

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 3:46 pm

Button says... · Wed Jan 05, 2011 3:46 pm

Hi there Skins, I'm back. For probably the umpteenth time.

I was wondering if you have some time, could you please take a look at this?
topic74145.html

I'd really appreciate. If you can't though, or just don't feel like it, I totally understand.
Either way, thanks!

-Coral-

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Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:00 pm

Sins says... · Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:00 pm

Okay, I'm finally free!

Shoot.